请帮忙翻译成英文

附件已经修改并翻译成日文。
请查收。
the attached file is already translated to
Japanese and revised.

这是我翻译的，没有自信，是不是病句？

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Pleas kind find the revision attachment that had been translated into Japanese.
翻译的时候要意译亮桥，不能太中式化。附件内容被修改过，不一定要凳告去强调修改的这个动作，the revision attachment,就是修改过后的附件，指原内容已经修改过；翻译枣键明成日语，肯定是被翻译成日语，作为attachment的后置定语从句；最后，要礼貌一些的请别人查收附件，常习惯于please kind find.....
同时你这种情况还可以写成：Please kind regarde the revision attachment whtat had been trasnated into Japanese.

另外，你的回答，一般人都能明白是什么意思，也没有什么错误。

如有问题还可以再问。

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Attachment has been revised and translated into Japanese
Please Check
建议楼主的修改
the attached file has already been revised and translated into Japanese文件要慎拦哗用衡辩被动宽行，
此外应该先修改后翻译
.....translated into 要用into

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Please check the attachment which has been revised and translated into Japanese.

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The attachment is already amend and changed in Japanese
Please check it.

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