我的名字叫xx。我今年12岁。我是男生。我眼睛小。我住在成都。我喜欢玩
电脑游戏。我喜欢玩DNF。我喜欢黑色。 最好少点字！
my name is xx, I am a 12-year-old boy with two little eyes. I live in Chengdu.
My hobby is playing computer games; such as DNF, and I am into black color.
(注意标点，不要一逗到底租迹，还有i 一定要大写成I)
(year-old后面可以庆型纯直接修饰名词，所以可以省略后面多加一句I am a boy,这样简单明确)
（可以说small eyes,但little eyes不止表示小，也可表示可爱，并不单纯指小）
（live in这里是表示一般现在时，不需要对其进行时态上的变动）
（可以用like，但hobby这里强调爱好，多的这个词语可以为你作文加分）
（最后你可以选择like, love black， 但是into强调钟爱black黑色，根据自己情况选择誉咐适当词语）
My name is xx, I am a boy of 12 eyes old. My eyes are tiny, I live in Chengdu. I enjoy playing computer games such as DNF and my favourite colour is black.
如果要扒历拦美式英语就把最后写成 and my favorite color is black。
纯烂庆人工翻译，望采纳春胡。不明白可以追问。
My name is xx. I'm 12 years old. I was a boy. My eyes are small. I live in chengdu. I like to play computer games. I like to play DNF. I like the black one.
My name is XX . I am a 12-year-old boy with small eyes. I lived in Chen Du. I like playing computer games such as DNF and my favorite color is black.
My name is xx. I am 12 years old this year. I am a boy. I have small eyes. I live in Chengdu. I like to play computer games. I like to play DNF. I like black..