求英语作文！急！初二水平！

假设现在是2015年，你们学校组织了一次去火星的旅行。在火星上你们到处参观，举行聚会，与外星人通电话。。。总之，你们玩的很愉快。
请很据上述内容，以第一人称的形式，描述一下你的火星之旅。

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we are in 2015 now. Our school arranges a travel to Mars. we get on space shuttle. it is very comfortable and run very fast. when we arrive Mars, the E.T. are very freindly with us. they invite us travel all around. the landscape is very beautiful we also have party there. both are very happy. we enjoy the time on Mars.
but the time run soon. when we leave Mars, we also invite the E.T. to visit the Earth. we hope to be back to Mars soon

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Today is an unforgettable day,because our school organized a trip to Mars.I felt very excited and we did a lot of things there.We visited a lot of places and we held a party there.We even communicated with the intelligent beings.Well it's somagical.And we enjoyed ourselves very much!

我的水平也差不多就是初二水平= =
你可以自伏烂己加一点什么进去……注意要用过去式老厅芦就ok。
可侍带能会有错误T-T莫怪~~

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