帮我看一下这段英文有没有错误

Duringmy intern, responsible for daily work of Food & Beverage Department. Thejob involves set all tables, lay cloths, busboys, dish up and clear table, etc.and also in charge of some promotional activities for holidays. With excellentplanning capability, I always created a surprise by a creative activity andmade them into practice.
淘宝某子简历给我做的英文简历　我说有很多语法错误　她死不认账　让我找英语专八的人确认
希望英语好的大家帮帮忙　　我把第一段挑出来给大家看看

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首句， responsible for daily work of Food & Beverage Department没有主语。Thejob involves Set all tables, lay all cloths, busboys(餐馆勤杂工,这个是唤颂歼名词放在这里不合适，其他都是动词，去掉这个句子就对了)dish up and clear table。“and also in charge of some promotional activities for holidays.”这句话的主语应该是“人 ”和冲而不是“ the job ”,所以建议两句话樱搏拆分开。“created a surprise”也不是常用搭配，surprise和最后的“made them into practice.”中的them,不搭。

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During my internship, I am responsible for the daily work of Food & Beverage Department. The job includes to set all tables, lay cloths, bus boys, dish up and clear table, etc.And I am also in charge of some promotional activities for holidays. Due to the excellent planning capability, I always created a surprise by a creative activity and made them into practice.当然有错误，码键我可是迟悔巧一句一句的修改的，记得采前埋纳哦

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没有，写的very good

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写的很好，继续努力

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