关于一道高一英语改错题
The story took place in Amsterdam,Hollywood in early 1940s after the German Nazis occupied most of Europe.If any persons known to be
Jews was found,they would be send to concentration camps farther east,most in Poland.Families were separated but transported in trains.For much days,they go without food,water,sanitation or fresh air.To avoid this terrible fate,some Jewish families went into hiding,often under the help of non-Jewish friends.
如题,请改出文中的10处错误,并说明原因,能改出错误者,我会追加悬赏分.拜托了.谢谢.
Hollywood Netherlands
occupied had occupied
persons person
Jews Jew
they he
send sent
most mostly
but and
much many
go went
短文核含改错改伏笑一般是9个错，有一厅粗行是正确的！
1. Hollywood→Holland
2. early 1940s→the early 1940s
3. any persons→any person
4. known to be Jews→known to be Jewish
5. would be send→would be sent
6. separated but transported→separated and transported
7. For much days→For many days
8. they go without→they went without
9. under the help→with the help
The story took place in Amsterdam,Hollywood (常识性错误，应为Holland)in（此处加the) early 1940s after the German Nazis occupied most of Europe.If any persons（应为person) known to be
Jews was found,they(应为 he 前后指代不一致) would be send (应拿纤中为sent 被动语态）to concentration camps farther （ 应为further) east,most in Poland.Families were separated but (应为and是并消山列关系，而不是转折关竖族系)transported in trains.For much （应为many）days,they go（应为went） without food,water,sanitation or fresh air.To avoid this terrible fate,some Jewish families went into hiding,often under （应为with）the help of non-Jewish friends.
1.For much days,they go without food,water,sanitation or fresh air应改为For many days,they had gone without food,water,sanitation or fresh air.(day是可数名词用many，for 短语用于完成时)
2.If any persons known to be应改为If any persons knew to be（迅悉know的过去时是knew）毁昌裤
其他我就不知道了，不过Jewish families went into hiding似乎纤简应改为Jewish families went to hide,是似乎啊！